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Sunday, June 5, 2022

The ache

This could possibly be a thought to complete

or an excuse for writing's sake

but before I submit myself to defeat

It's a chance that I prefer to take

I have long been deep in thought

and many a mental war I have fought


I've had this feeling before

my memories don't lie, they serve me right

There have been many a fantastic lore

and with a cry, they shed some light

No worries, this is no fancy bake

for I definitely feel an odd little ache


This pain is often underrated,

and castaway into the outer shores

This pang is occasionally dramatized

and celebrated with almighty roars

It can be said with some conviction

that this is life's greatest contradiction


I've lived this torment before

if only I could hark back to the solution

a eureka moment from my mind store

could lead to a faster resolution

Tired I am, this is too much to take

How to rid myself of this giant ache?

6 comments:

pen-name said...

Nice one, bud!

Anonymous said...

Nicely written! 😊 Hope ur ache went away!!😊

Anonymous said...

Nice. But wonder what is the ache???

Anonymous said...

Painstakingly written. Wondering what pain.

Anonymous said...

Nicely written

Anonymous said...

Is the pain real?