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Sunday, May 13, 2012

In the Zone


Life – a mixture of ups and downs,

No wonder the latter makes him frown

 

Moving forward- a difficult task

Reaching his destination is all he asks

 

Weary- jaded into a sudden lull

Steers him to many protracted a struggle

Sedated- by this tedious crawl

Often pushes him towards a brawl

 

Traffic- breathing now so slow

His exuberance has become shallow

 

But then…

 

Survive – becomes the magic word

Surmounting all that he feared

 

Thrill - a catalyst for us all

Drives him to top the tallest wall

Brazen - by these exploits

Powers him ahead like an asteroid

 

Tempo- the breathing is calm

Making way for the incoming alarm

 

Life – a mixture of ups and downs,

Overcoming the latter makes him fit for a crown



4 comments:

pen-name said...

Very nice... I have another word to say which you'll get to know. Actually 2 words :)

Sid said...

Thank You:)

sweta said...

good one. Thought it might be a crib fest, but was optimistic instead!

Sid said...

:). Thank you