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Sunday, July 31, 2022

The overcooked idea

 It was something that flit by

that gave me pause in my thoughts

creating much chaos, I do not lie

refrain do I from connecting the dots?

Disturbed I am by something physical

but drawn to return to speculation so whimsical


A break in links often disturb my plans

if it wasn't for those pesky eyes

I would conjure those thoughts in shallow pans

and enjoy the newly made curry with some rice

but now I can do only little but weep

having been shaken from thoughts so deep


This is another moment lost

to a sound vibrating within my ears

I would have the idea on a roast

marveling it's taste with some pears

but it has been sadly sabotaged

by something so hopelessly camouflaged


I have lost the pattern in my thoughts

to a weird smell that reached my nostrils

I would boil the concept to a froth.....

but alas why do I feel so nasal

There is a sight that open my eyes

and a dry hiss pulls my ears

sitting on the cooktop in front of me

lies the burn remnants of nothing nice

smoke so strong it bring me to tears

and now I have no evening meal.


Note: This poem is about daydreaming while cooking. and not noticing that the food getting burnt is trying to pull you from your reverie, until it is too late

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Good one, Sir. An aptly written poem.

Anonymous said...

Very engaging but sad feeling.

Anonymous said...

Found it very interesting the way all the thoughts were put together…They intertwined very well into eachotheršŸ˜Š

Anonymous said...

As always there is humour. It can be read a regrets for lost opportunities too

Anonymous said...

C’ est tres interesant

Anonymous said...

Its good humor :)

Anonymous said...

Nicely written, so relatable